Waaaaahahahahahaha!! That was great! So funny! What a great Gojyo voice it had! And mmmmmmguh, hot too!
I really, really liked the way you played heavily on all the artificial, household smells. It was really appropriate a) as a counterpart to Hakkai's Phereomone-focus in mine, and b) as an extension of the things Gojyo's always wanted but lacked - a normal home where normal things like cleaning happened under normal circumstances. I also liked the way you made the desire on Gojyo's side quite believable by spending a lot of time in the first half of the fic with him resisting how he was feeling.
I laughed out loud lots through this, and now there's a big (stoopid) grin on my face. Thankyou so much!! ^_____^
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Date: 2006-03-09 10:06 am (UTC)I really, really liked the way you played heavily on all the artificial, household smells. It was really appropriate a) as a counterpart to Hakkai's Phereomone-focus in mine, and b) as an extension of the things Gojyo's always wanted but lacked - a normal home where normal things like cleaning happened under normal circumstances. I also liked the way you made the desire on Gojyo's side quite believable by spending a lot of time in the first half of the fic with him resisting how he was feeling.
I laughed out loud lots through this, and now there's a big (stoopid) grin on my face. Thankyou so much!! ^_____^